Take it away, Dawn...
I have been writing BROKEN WINGS for a few months now and I
am pleased to report it is coming along nicely! Albeit slowly, I have cmpleted
the first draft and now on the second of my war/romance novel. Finding the time
to write is very challenging at best and with a four year old in tow you can
imagine time is very precious..
BROKEN WINGS is set in the beautiful setting of Cumbria
specifically, Lake Windermere and Kendal town where my two main characters
Joshua and Angelina first meet before he is posted on a five month tour to
Afghanistan. This is an intense love story full of angst, passion and drama
that will evoke all kinds of emotions. It is by no means predictable and will
have you guessing right to the very end! My book cover has once again been
designed by the talented cover designer Ares Juan. I am predicting the release
of my novel to be during the spring 2013. So for those of you who are looking
forward to the release of BROKEN WINGS please see an excerpt below which will
give you an idea of what to expect. Enjoy…
BROKEN WINGS EXCERPT:
They stood naked in the shimmering cool water; the warm
September night was calm and still, with the moon shining beams of light onto
the vast lake. The curves of their naked bodies were shadowing the water.
Neither one said a word as they looked deep into each others saddened eyes,
their united silence saying so much. Angelina did not want to let him go
fearing she would never see him again.
Joshua smiled, “I
will come back to you I promise” Angelina placed her head on his chest, tears
falling down her reddened cheeks. “I could not bear it if I never saw you
again, please don’t go,” she pleaded with all her heart. “I have no choice. You
knew when we met that this would be a possibility Angelina. I will be back
before you know it. This is my duty as a soldier, I have to go.”
She felt her heart closing in, the tightness was
suffocating. All those young men who never made it home alive… She did not want
her Joshua to be one of them; however, she also understood that he needed to go
along with the rest of his regiment. This knowledge did not make it any easier
to bear. She had a bad feeling about this posting in a way she never had with
the others. Angelina just could not shake it off. Joshua was not able to
disclose the whereabouts of his deployment, although he wanted to with all his being.
He had an urge to share his inner fears with her, but he held off knowing this
would make his leaving far harder for Angelina to deal with.
This was their last night together and they decided to spend
it down by the lake, their very special place. This was where they spent their
first date together eighteen months ago. That first date had sealed their rare
and irrevocable feelings for one another that could not be denied. They have
never looked back. When they were together it was as if the rest of the world
didn’t exist and time stood still. Joshua fought his undeniable feelings with
all that he had, not wanting to get involved with anyone knowing he was being
posted soon. But the draw was too strong and the fight was over before it
began. He was mesmerized by her. Angelina was deep and sensitive and was the
suffer-in-silence type. He liked that about her. She was unlike anyone he had
ever known, she understood him in a way no one else ever had before.
Angelina wanted to hold Joshua, never let him go and to keep
him safe from harm. She held him so tight as if her own life depended on it. “I
love you so much Joshua, please come back to me.” She cried uncontrollably now.
He took off his ring that was passed down to him by his grandfather many years
before and placed it on her finger. “I promise you when I return I will make
you my wife.” With that Joshua kissed her gently on the lips. He hated leaving
her; he knew this was as hard for her as it was for him.
“Joshua, when you’re gone time stands still until you return
to me. I can’t move forward or backward. I can’t sleep because of worrying
about you. There are so many soldiers returning back home in boxes. Every time
I turn on the TV there is a news item about a young soldier not making it back
alive the families left behind tormented by their grief.”
“Last week there were two soldiers from the West Midlands
who were killed by a road side bomb in Afghanistan headlining the news. What if
you get posted there again Joshua? I know the loss you suffered on your first
tour of Afghanistan that could so easily have been you. You are my very reason
for existing so you better come back to me. Do you hear me? ”
Joshua looked into Angelina’s beautiful almond eyes. He knew
it would break her heart if she found out he was being posted there for a
second tour, but there was nothing he could do or say. He wrapped his large
arms around her and held Angelina tight. “I love you with all my heart. I
promise I will be back for Valentines Day and then I will be back for good. I
will not be extending, I promise you, it’s only six months. It will fly by. I
promise I will write to you all the time.” Angelina could not control the flood
of tears falling down her pale cheeks, she could hardly breathe fearing this
could be the last time she ever saw him alive. Joshua ran his finger slowly
over the small scar etched into her right eyebrow. He held her face in the palm
of his large hands and kissed it, brushing the tears from her sodden cheeks. He
felt her pain. He was feeling it too. No words could take their pain away; it
was something they had to endure together until his return.
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Woo hoo! Great excerpt, Dawn Torrens. Look forward to the release.
ReplyDeleteHow exciting, Dawn! Congrats!! Wonderful excerpt and cover, by the way. :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the excerpt. The cover is beautiful. I'm sure the book will be great also. Congrats!
ReplyDeleteGood Luck with the book
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